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Leaf by khyperia Leaf by khyperia
I tried out lineart, and as you can see: I have a terribly shaky hand. Not good for this style.

I also tried (for the first time, derp) actually planning things out and arranging things to fit together. I probably utterly failed at it.

The sketch, which I (as always) like a lot more- [link]
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horriblePencilist Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't see what you mean by shakey lineart, it looks fine to me.
However, there's some other stuff you can work on.
Anatomy & Proportions: The head looks like a big balloon. The ears and the snout should be bigger, and maybe move the eye more to the right. Also, the neck looks unnaturally long.
Colors: I take it the unicolor line was intentional, but I don't know if it works. It looks nice on the wings and the leaf, but at her neck, it really blends with the base color and the hair, creating an almost solid looking blob. Also, it heavily contrasts with the dark shade of pink, which you should avoid. Also, make the background contrast more with Fluttershy so she pops out more.
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ArtStude3n2 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really cute.
Uh... (;), is the light source coming from the right of the pic?
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khyperia Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah. And then I literally just noticed now that her feathers are shaded completely. wrong.
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TheAdolescentKing Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
Oh Fluttershy
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